"We can do no great things,
but small things with great love."
---Mother Teresa
y.y. 發表評論於
indeed i love the last stanza . . . "awkard" and surprise, making me laugh . . . love the "ugly fish" . . . very interesting !!!
y.y. 發表評論於
過於從詩歌裏尋求“大意思”，就會失去些什麽，感覺吧
y.y. 發表評論於
yes, playing words . . .:)
作舟詩集 發表評論於
thanks, zf!!
i find myself getting tired of all the pretentious seriousness in writing, not just others' ... myself included ....
it has to feel real and right when right writes "serious" stuff.....at least for oneself.....
poetry, like other kinds of art form, should be fun to read, writie, i think...
that was why i was attracted by Henry Miller's style of writing .... his books are full of black springs, but his sense of humor/optimism helped him deal with the dark side of humanity.....
z.f. 發表評論於
I really like the Humor here:
LOVE
Is a sinking
Boat
Beautifully floating
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
A he and a she
Or
A she and a she
Or
A he and a he
etc. etc.
Busy mending
Leaks
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