想妹妹 (兒歌）

妹妹，昨晚我又失眠

Peering through the screen
Gazing at the sky
I long for my sis
When months scurry by

Scraggly I'm getting
Scraggy I'm turning
For unaltered love
Is strongly burning

妹妹，想你。。。

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• 歡迎line詩人來美語壇,你的英詩既地道又流暢,謝謝分享. -婉蕠- ♀ (690 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 08:43:50

• 我天天背字典 -line- ♀ (152 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 09:06:07

• 覺得line是謙虛 - passionate lines come from passionate people -billnet- ♂ (258 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 09:27:59

• 我是新人。的確， passionate lines come from passionate people -line- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 13:02:20

• 歡迎，希望新人多貢獻這樣的琅琅上口的詩句。 -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 13:51:09

• 謝謝回複，周日快樂。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 11:48:34

• 向婉蕠問好，周麽愉快！ -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 09:30:08

• Thanks.billnet,you have a nice Sunday. -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 11:47:51

• 替你試譯一下 -bahai- ♂ (1846 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 09:32:55

• 用詞很浪漫有新意，真的不是bear麽？ -薆馜- ♀ (405 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 14:07:41

• 你的改動很好 -line- ♀ (351 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 14:46:33

• 我想你是想說 -line- ♀ (131 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 16:48:19