稍微改了一下,切磋切磋:
Peering through the screenGazing at the skyI long for my sisWhile months scurrying byScrawny I'm gettingScraggy I'm turningFor the unaltered loveIs strongly burning
• 你的改動很好 -line- ♀ (351 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 14:46:33
• 我想你是想說 -line- ♀ (131 bytes) () 04/17/2011 postreply 16:48:19