天上碧桃和露種﹐日邊紅杏倚雲栽
您的翻譯:
The green peach is grown with dew on Heaven;
The red apricot planted leaning on clouds by the sun.
是不是改成這樣更好點,grow可以有被動,但大多數時間都用成主動,有自然生長的意思
plant當種,栽講,個人認為用成被動更合理些
grow against sth - 植物倚著什麽生長,自然之態,
Train a plant to grow against a wall or framework
這裏紅杏倚雲而長,姿態嫋嫋,慵懶美麗
The green peach is planted with dew on Heaven,
the red apricot growing against clouds by the sun.
一點淺見~~~