another beautiful translation! 等我有空了錄。有點問題：））

Falling from sky, covering all below.- Falling from the sky, covering all below is more easy to sing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It’s you that melt life onto the fields - onto or into, which one is better?

That’ve made the world one of silver glow - this one is difficult, seems too many syllables.

I may contact you from QQ in a couple of days. So please check QQ.

 

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• 奇怪，中間怎麽那麽多空格，裏麵有三個問題。 -yy888- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/09/2011 postreply 19:51:55

• 回複：another beautiful translation! -柏泉- ♂ (1139 bytes) () 01/09/2011 postreply 20:14:39

• 更正 -柏泉- ♂ (240 bytes) () 01/09/2011 postreply 20:18:51

• check qq -yy888- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/09/2011 postreply 21:45:35