another beautiful translation! 等我有空了錄。有點問題：））

Falling from sky, covering all below.- Falling from the sky, covering all below is more easy to sing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It’s you that melt life onto the fields - onto or into, which one is better?

That’ve made the world one of silver glow - this one is difficult, seems too many syllables.

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