【英譯唐詩】Viewing in the spring (《春望》）

春望

杜甫 〔唐代〕

國破山河在，城春草木深。
感時花濺淚，恨別鳥驚心。
烽火連三月，家書抵萬金。
白頭搔更短，渾欲不勝簪。

Viewing in the spring 

Author: Du, Fu [Tang Dynasty]

Nation broken, mountains and rivers are still there;
Grasses and trees in the city had grown high in the spring.
The blossoming flowers made me in tears when thinking of the current situation;
The chirping birds aroused me to hate the separation from family.
The fire of war had burnt three months,
A letter from family would be worth ten thousand gold.
My gray hair is fewer as my keep scratching,
It almost couldn’t hold the hairpin.

所有跟帖： 

• 第一句言語簡潔。第三句的語法是不是可以再推敲一下？主句主語和從句不是一個，分詞不應該這麽用吧？ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2022 postreply 23:56:34

• 多謝妖妖指出，我再想想看：） -WXCTEATIME- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/05/2022 postreply 08:46:41

• 供參考： -ibelieu- ♀ (7083 bytes) () 04/05/2022 postreply 09:55:16

• 多謝信兄！我仔細看看認真學習：） -WXCTEATIME- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/05/2022 postreply 10:27:04