湊興譯《江雪》，加獻拙譯 《登鸛雀樓》和《春曉》

柳宗元《江雪》

千山鳥飛絕
萬徑人蹤滅
孤舟蓑笠翁
獨釣寒江雪

《Snowy River》

Amid ten hundreds of hills, eradicated of birds in hover
And ten thousands of trails, sterile of traces of a hiker
An elder in a lone boat, in a straw cloak and a bamboo hat
Is angling in solitude, in the chill of the snowy river

 

王之渙《登鸛雀樓》

白日依山盡
黃河入海流
欲窮千裏目
更上一層樓

《Ascend Guanque Tower》

Down the mountain lingers a bright sun
Into the sea winds the Yellow River's run
To exhaust a thousand-mile view
I ascended to the next level anew

孟浩然《春曉》

春眠不覺曉
處處聞啼鳥
夜來風雨聲
花落知多少

《A Spring Dawn》

A spring slumber made me sleep over the dawn
While bird chirpings were heard all around
With wind and rain clamoring all night long
I wondered how many petals were on the ground

 

所有跟帖： 

• 沙發！太棒啦！梅雨潭詩意盎然。。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 08:35:36

• 盈盈見笑 -老鍵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 08:53:54

• 讚鍵哥！ -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 08:51:06

• 問好顫音兄 -老鍵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 14:23:30

• 哇，這是把五言絕句一網打盡的節奏啊：）詩人就是詩人，濃縮了所有語言的精華表現出來，非常厲害！梅雨潭太美啦！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 09:00:56

• 美風版主過獎 -老鍵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 14:25:07

• 江雪,把絕句用類似律詩的格式翻譯, -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 10:11:04

• 問好花木兄 -老鍵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 14:25:50

• Great job! -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (280 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 11:47:16

• 羚羊呢？他一定有見解：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 12:31:44

• 蟲蟲佳評，感謝 -老鍵- ♂ (209 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 14:38:17

• 高水平翻譯，大讚！ -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 15:49:00

• 謝忒忒賞讀 -老鍵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 03:58:49

• 譯得好！意境都到了. -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 04:54:01