Thank for reading and thank you for your suggestion

來源: 馬下人 於 2014-11-16 19:08:17 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (284 bytes)
回答: interesting poem and nice translation 由 bearsback 於 2014-11-15 23:34:20

I had similar thought when I did my fist pass of translation but I could not find right wording. After I read you comment I though over again. I made change to the line. It becomes "容他盡情呼吸卻使他喘不上氣".

Thank you again.

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