用 your 更能讓讀者看出詩人對蜀相的敬意

本帖於 2012-08-20 18:34:09 時間, 由版主 林貝卡 編輯
回答: 蜀 相 (唐)杜甫海外逸士2012-08-20 08:08:07

The Premier of Shu Kingdom


Where to seek for the temple of the premier?


Outside JinGuan Town with cypresses so lush.


Green grass on steps reflects the color of spring;


Orioles beyond leaves have vain sweet warbling.


Three visits to bother him for tactics in affairs under heaven;


Heart of old courtier on starting the dynasty of two generations


這兩句需要聯在一起吧?  平衡一下,把後麵的兩朝搬到前麵來:Two generations of the dynasty were started under  your  whole-hearted assistance   (用your 表達出詩人對蜀相的敬意)


But he died before the army gained victory,


Which makes heroes wet gown fronts with tears.  ? (襟:lapel, turndown, turndown collar, revers)

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