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According to the Chinese official news media on Monday, eleven people were died of consuming vinegar stored in plastic barrels which contain toxic antifreeze , at least 120 more people were poisoned.

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• 中文理解有誤，改一下 -好學又好問- ♀ (732 bytes) () 08/29/2011 postreply 08:27:45

• 自己先改一下，were died of 應該是 died from -好學又好問- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/29/2011 postreply 08:37:58

• 恩，好學mm，那個the Chinese ...的the可能不需要 -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/29/2011 postreply 09:10:31

• 太對了！這個死冠詞，我的死穴! 謝謝MM! 改成這樣吧： -好學又好問- ♀ (50 bytes) () 08/29/2011 postreply 09:15:19

• 對，因為一有Chinese，就已經“定”了，所以不需要“定”冠詞了。 -非文學青年- ♀ (185 bytes) () 08/29/2011 postreply 09:17:57

• 狂點頭！終於明白了！Chinese作為形容詞就不用再加 the了。 -好學又好問- ♀ (282 bytes) () 08/29/2011 postreply 09:30:13

• 這個die from 還是 die of 我也拿不準。感覺die of通常隻和疾病連接。 -好學又好問- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/29/2011 postreply 09:36:18