回複：七夕快?middot;

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回答: 七夕快樂 由 carpediem 於 2011-08-06 02:20:32

A very nice writing! I can always learn something from your writings.I just have a few small comments. 說錯了請不要在意。

1. brought me occasionally uncomfortable self-consciousness - brought me occasionally a feeling of uncomfortable self-consciousness?

2. inside the marginalized immigrant community -  within the marginalized immigrant community?

3. But those days are history - But those days are a history?

4. I don’t dine alone - I don't dine alone anymore.

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• Thank you for the suggestion! -carpediem- ♂ 給 carpediem 發送悄悄話 carpediem 的博客首頁 (309 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 12:10:52

• great writing. 探討一下您的修改。 -jingbeiboy- ♂ 給 jingbeiboy 發送悄悄話 (436 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 23:04:13

• Thanks for the comments! Jingbei. -NewVoice- ♀ 給 NewVoice 發送悄悄話 (1130 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 02:39:47

• Thank you, Jingbei! -carpediem- ♂ 給 carpediem 發送悄悄話 carpediem 的博客首頁 (782 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 07:31:59

• actually, two, haha. -非文學青年- ♀ 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (42 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 08:59:28

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