great writing. 探討一下您的修改。

1. will it be better to use “made me uncomfortably self-conscious”？

2.  I think "But those days are history" is properly used.  

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• Thanks for the comments! Jingbei. -NewVoice- ♀ (1130 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 02:39:47

• Thank you, Jingbei! -carpediem- ♂ (782 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 07:31:59

• actually, two, haha. -非文學青年- ♀ (42 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 08:59:28