回複：七夕快?middot;

來源: 於 2011-08-06 05:01:55 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

A very nice writing! I can always learn something from your writings.I just have a few small comments. 說錯了請不要在意。

1. brought me occasionally uncomfortable self-consciousness - brought me occasionally a feeling of uncomfortable self-consciousness?

2. inside the marginalized immigrant community -  within the marginalized immigrant community?

3. But those days are history - But those days are a history?

4. I don’t dine alone - I don't dine alone anymore.