小薑餅人

Gingerbread Man

By Catherine 11/20/2004

The Gingerbread man could not get across the river. First, he picked up a leaf. Next, he put it on the water, and jump on it! Also he across the river! Last he went to a forest.

The Gingerbread man went in the forest and he saw a beautiful Gingerbread house! The fox was so angry. That is how the gingerbread man across the river.

[幅圖]: 一輪紅日，兩隻小鳥，兩岸各有一棵大樹，水上是一片樹葉， 樹葉上躺了小薑餅人，岸上是一隻狐狸，對岸是一個房子，房子在樹下。很好的構思。

老師的評語：Excellent ending！