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Sense Of Something Coming
by Rainer Maria Rilke
I am like a flag in the center of open space.
I sense ahead the wind which is coming, and must live
it through.
while the things of the world still do not move:
the doors still close softly, and the chimneys are full
of silence,
the windows do not rattle yet, and the dust still lies down.
I already know the storm, and I am troubled as the sea.
I leap out, and fall back,
and throw myself out, and am absolutely alone
in the great storm.
就要來了
我像是一麵旗幟 挺立在曠野的中心
我知道風要來了 而我必須
要去麵對
當所有的一切都還巍然不動：
門依舊悄然閉合 煙囪的煙氣寂然地
直直向上
窗戶還沒有咯咯作響 塵埃保持著落定的姿態
可是我已經知道了 暴風雨就要來臨
被這種預知所困擾 我翻騰如海
我跳起 又落回
我把自己拋了出去 直到剩下孤單單的一個自己
飄搖在那巨大的風暴之中
對情緒描述得很準確，點評語言也是詩一樣的優美 ：）
這一首的動，張揚奔放; 連靜，也像是黎明前的黑暗，會有一觸而發的噴薄。