我的英譯《江雪》。看到幾個茶客翻譯古詩，心癢了，也來湊熱鬧。歡迎批頭論足啊！

我的英譯柳宗元的《江雪》

 

Thousands mountains bird fly no more

Ten thousands trails man track vanished all

Only a single boat an old man in minion and hat

Lonely fishing the cold river and snow

[認真的雪3]

好喜歡你這版的“直譯勇氣”，把意象骨架都搭上了！