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one day

i was holding

my penis

come to understand

the whole scope of

post-modernism

z z

note: Some iguanas have a third eye that helps regulate how long they expose themselves to the sun (flash credit: fUSION).

z.z. 發表評論於 2006-04-10 10:47:47

行為藝術 :))))

not really ... i didn't "perform" it to an audience ...

haha.....u funny!!

地中海人魚 發表評論於 2006-04-10 02:19:56

行為藝術。。。

作舟詩集 發表評論於 2006-04-08 10:57:48

wx000,

glad a male friend can translate a poem like this ... :)))

like your variation too!

you are funny!!!!

zf,

路在腳下。。。衝啊。。。:))

~&~

z.f. 發表評論於 2006-04-08 09:50:55

靈與肉。。。(主義多多，哪個主義“WHOLE”？？？)

這首詩的WHOLE BODY:

靈（picture/flash）

肉 (poem)

足 (note)

路在腳下。。。衝啊。。。:))

(我在想如果每個人都成了靈與肉的整體，這個世界豈不有可能變共產主義?????? 到時豈不是沒了幽默。。。。。。

wx000 發表評論於 2006-04-08 09:19:52

trying to translate it

一天
我正握著
我的陰莖
猛然
對後現代主義
大澈大悟

z.f. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 23:02:58

laugh and think and laugh again ...

藝術/詩歌讓人感覺愉快感覺痛快，還因為它的反叛精神。。。這首詩裏的痛快之感在於反叛。。。

wx000 發表評論於 2006-04-07 22:42:59

haha.. 模仿一下

one day
i was holding my pink slip
&
come to understand
the whole scope of
capitalism

@ @
^

z.f. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 21:14:28

"real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ..."

I AGREE!!!!!

藝術/詩歌在我的心中很美很純淨很享受。。。不然我為什麽要讀詩歌？？？

這首詩，如果沒讀 note，沒有因為配圖和note 裏的提示讓我想起“覺”和“覺”裏的另一副插圖的話，我不會覺得真幽默。。。

laugh and think and laugh again ...

z.z. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 20:32:57

幽默 and 搞笑 are two different things, i think....

the word "搞" has very negative connotations, to me at least....think about it ... it shows the casual, so-so quality of the action as well as the result...

its equivalent in English might be "get" ... get this, get that, etc..

real humor, i think, has wisdom in it besides what makes people laugh and think and laugh again ...

z.f. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 20:05:55

但是真正的幽默詩應該是最難的吧。。。詩人提倡“幽默”詩？？？

“one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor。。。 ”很正常吧，詩歌是否也搞笑？對不起，我對待詩歌的態度是不是太嚴肅了點兒。。。請指正。。。

I read the WHOLE BODY of the poem (the picture/flash, the words and the note...)

讀完覺得很好笑很好笑。。。

期待你寫首詩，能讓咱們直勾勾地瞧一瞧。。。:)

好難啊。。。:(

:)

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::

:))

happy friday!!!

z.z. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 19:22:17

i know friends on here all have a good sense of humor ...

laugh, laugh whenever you can ....!!!

one of the things lacking in modern Chinese poetry is humor, i think ....

many of our poets are wrapped up too tight, or too fragile to withstand criticism ....

z.f. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 18:21:50

good sense of HUMOR

no wonder you have such a good TASTE

eat well!!!

remind me the art by alex grey you posted in your article "覺" ...

a human being has more than one thousand eyes...

IT is always there...

cannot help laughing:))))))))))))

y.y. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 17:46:38

hahahaha :) you're in!!!

z.z. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 17:42:56

:))))

i am all for a woman's rights to attack any ism !!!!!

y.y. 發表評論於 2006-04-07 17:40:22

love it!!!

for fun :)

Someday

I was naked
in the morning sun

&

seeing the scars
on my body
left by surrealism

: indeed surrealism "enjoys" "dissecting" woman body :)

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one day

i was holding

my penis

come to understand

the whole scope of

post-modernism

z z

note: Some iguanas have a third eye that helps regulate how long they expose themselves to the sun (flash credit: fUSION).

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