【英譯唐詩】楓橋夜泊 (Mooring by Maple Bridge at Night)

楓橋夜泊     Mooring by Maple Bridge at Night 

張繼 〔唐代〕

 

月落烏啼霜滿天，Caws broke through the ice crystal filled night sky at moonset,

江楓漁火對愁眠。I couldn’t fall asleep when facing the maples along the river and the fishing fire on boats.

姑蘇城外寒山寺，It was Hanshan Temple outside the Gusu city,

夜半鍾聲到客船。from where the midnight bell rang out to my boat.

所有跟帖： 

• 到客船，to my boat？難道不應該是reaching ？ -惜也- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/12/2021 postreply 04:28:30

• Reaching 應該也可以，我不太確信rang out to是否合語法習慣，譯的時候隨手寫的，沒有琢磨。多謝指點。 -WXCTEATIME- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/12/2021 postreply 06:11:42

• 我認為介詞單薄，其實虛詞大多有單薄的問題。況且中文的＂到＂，可實可虛的一個字。在＂寒山寺＂這首裏，我認為它是實義詞，＂到達＂，這 -惜也- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/12/2021 postreply 11:45:59

• 這樣理解，詩意才會渾厚縈繞不息。 -惜也- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/12/2021 postreply 11:53:43

• 讚同！到應作動詞解，分析很精彩到位，感謝。 -WXCTEATIME- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/12/2021 postreply 13:21:10