學英語要練寫作

When I woke up in the morning, raindrops still patted my tent. I got up and stepped out to scent fresh saps of the pine trees, and to my astonishment, a dog, which appeared lost or homeless, was running by. Struck with possibly even more astonishment when seeing me, the dog braced his fore feet, examing me. He might be wondering what I was up to in a place of nowhere. I quickly went back and picked up several pieces of bread. The dog was standing still when I came out. I then threw the bread toward him. The dog, trying to shake the raindrops off his back, jumped at the bread and rushed on. Now I heard trills of birds, which ushered in the day.

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• double your fun: (my try) -cicila- ♀ (720 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 21:57:06

• 很有味道。我來這一周，隻見你一個知己 -simplex- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:10:52

• 給你應應景。the應為to。另幾個typos，不說了。 -cicila- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:20:27

• 看到了。我喜歡你的英語。 -simplex- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:23:47

• 你寫的非常好。引我冒了一泡。聽說新加波治安很好， 你們在那裏一定很安全：） -cicila- ♀ (85 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 21:52:04

• 我要向你學英語。由於治安好，很多老太太半夜走著到我這來 -simplex- ♀ (18 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 22:09:47

• 那好啊，以後你可以收教學費了。現在工作難找， -cicila- ♀ (148 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 22:21:51

• hahaha 聽說美氣一夾輪4元多。真坑人。新加坡東西便宜。我剛吃完 -simplex- ♀ (36 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 23:00:22

• 回複：double your fun: (my try) -浮上來冒個小泡- ♀ (39 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 19:23:28