double your fun: (my try)

(to be continued)

I could feel the pride from deep within --there is no one else like me,  who feels obligated to be this generous and compassionate on every occassion. Since i was totally lost in this isolated island, I even ate birds' eggs to stave off starvation. Even though  I felt  more and more hungery  with the new day coming in, I still did not hesitate the sacrifice the last slice of bread for that skinny dog. If I was  buried in the island tommorrow,  I could die with honour and dignity for my big heart...

It took a while to get the sleeping bag and tent tidied up. "I cann't afford to sit here waiting death. I got to get out of here. " I said.

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• 很有味道。我來這一周，隻見你一個知己 -simplex- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:10:52

• 給你應應景。the應為to。另幾個typos，不說了。 -cicila- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:20:27

• 看到了。我喜歡你的英語。 -simplex- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/23/2011 postreply 22:23:47

• 你寫的非常好。引我冒了一泡。聽說新加波治安很好， 你們在那裏一定很安全：） -cicila- ♀ (85 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 21:52:04

• 我要向你學英語。由於治安好，很多老太太半夜走著到我這來 -simplex- ♀ (18 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 22:09:47

• 那好啊，以後你可以收教學費了。現在工作難找， -cicila- ♀ (148 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 22:21:51

• hahaha 聽說美氣一夾輪4元多。真坑人。新加坡東西便宜。我剛吃完 -simplex- ♀ (36 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 23:00:22

• 回複：double your fun: (my try) -浮上來冒個小泡- ♀ (39 bytes) () 04/24/2011 postreply 19:23:28