Hehe, you are what you are.

1.In prose and in poetry, one must have a subject in a declarative statement.  Everyone is dead wrong when they don't follow the rule. You're no exception.

2. In prose and in poetry, one must use the definite article before words like "east, west, north, south" to tell directions.Again you're no exception.

3. You do think that words like " see, watch, gaze, look ..." mean the same in poetry,huh? What an artist! No subject, no nuance, that's really the best poetry of your own kind.

4. Even your Chinese sucks when you insist on the first two lines of the original Chinese poem as two sentences.

 

 

 

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• 朋友，請自重，有話好好說，不要罵人。 -3271963- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 08:24:59

• For chrisske, don't take my critical comments for bad-name-calli -verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 08:56:02

• hahaha, can't help laughing. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (43 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 10:12:12

• Thanks for shedding light on me about him. -verdeboy- ♂ (142 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:17:44

• 如是友好討論，不必用"sucks"這個詞。 -3271963- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 10:38:37

• Come on. Suck is not a bad word -Verdeboy- ♂ (40 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 13:23:29

• 本壇還是好人多！ 感謝海外逸士給美壇貢獻的眾多閱讀欣賞作品！ -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:17:13

• 我覺得verdeboy給的是constuctive的批評。至少從他們的討論，我是受益了。 -cicila- ♀ (69 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:24:09

• Thanks for giving me the credit. -Verdeboy- ♂ (46 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:25:59

• 文中的 nuance 這個詞用的很到位。 -灰衣人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:08:04

• discussion inside -海外逸士- ♂ (1558 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:35:16

• This is not the right way to learn. I will back off. Good-luck. -Verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 13:21:02

• 請把話說完。 -海外逸士- ♂ (121 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 14:56:28

• 請去上麵。 -Verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 16:09:06