回複：急！ 求翻譯：薄雲朦冷月，夜幕鎖香魂。俱素清寒處，紅顏不染塵。

I make some changes, based on your version.

Thin clouds shade the cold moon;

The curtain of night locks the fragrant soul.

Where in the pale chilliness,

The red cheeks are free from dust.

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• 謝謝！ -鳴凡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2010 postreply 09:06:17

• like this: Where in the pale chilliness, The red cheeks are fre -桃花澗- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2010 postreply 16:24:52