英譯：致少女/For My Girl (Ver. 1.01)

英譯：致少女/For My Girl

(Ver. 1.01)

【致少女】元梁
For My Girl/Yuan Liang
Translation: 美壇奇葩


清澈的小河
蜿蜒在
起伏的山壑

A clear river
Winding with
A gully in the mountain


簡陋的小屋
點綴著
碧綠的秧禾

Simple shacks
Dotting the
Green cropland


斑斕的小鳥
飛舞在
茂密的枝柯

Colorful birds
Flying in
Dense leaves and branches

揚鞭的小童
吆喝著
笨重的牛車

Whip-flipping kids
Tending their
Heavy carts

秀美的少女
歡喜這
自然的景色

A beautiful girl
Enjoying such a
Natural scene

俏麗的麵龐
純淨的眼波
你, 卻是我的天國

Your pretty face
And innocent glances
Make my heaven


哦, 可愛的姑娘
你象那安詳的白鴿
一切神情
都那麽溫柔, 平和

Oh, my lovely girl
Calm as a dove
Your expression
Is gentle and calm

哦, 親愛的姑娘
你如那優雅的天鵝
每個姿態
都那麽高貴, 獨特

Oh, my dear girl
You are like a swan
Every gesture
Is noble and unique

多麽希望 ----
這愛意始萌的歡樂
在此銘刻
你的笑靨
將永遠珍放在
我心中的像冊

How much I hope --
My joy of sprouting love
Is here inscribed
Your smile
Will always be in
My heart's album

多麽盼望 --
這春心初漾的羞澀
不被塗抹
你的情懷
將永久難忘在
我未來的生活

How much I wish --
My shyness of beginning tenderness
Will not be stained
And your feelings
Will be unforgettable
In my whole life

多想就這樣陪著你嗬
好像蒼山伴著青河 …

How much I want be with you
A green mountain would with a clear river …

所有跟帖： 

• i am waiting for ver 3.0, ha -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 15:36:50

• 心裏發癢了吧.hehe -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 16:24:18

• 我不是翻譯家， 我是挑剔家， ha -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:27:26

• me too,third silly. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:38:03

• 你不太傻。 我看你英文不錯， 那令人頭暈的64個句子已經奠定了你英文 -bearsback- ♂ (6 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:44:22

• that's a true statement -bearsback- ♂ (34 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:49:00

• ＂你不太傻＂這句不好。haha -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:55:18

• haha, i know, help15 is a smart woman, 她做事認真令人欽佩 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:00:07

• true。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (88 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:12:23

• 嚴肅認真的，我覺得你應該 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (246 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:34:55

• I can't talk much here because I am outside -bearsback- ♂ (112 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:08:50

• 對不起，朋友們。剛回來。想奇芭兄鞠躬！這裏的朋友真讓我感動，謝謝大家！ -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:40:55

• A green mountain would with a clear river …? -help15- ♀ (4 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 16:23:14

• 回複： -star-night- ♂ (95 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:55:30

• 'be" can be left out in poems? especially with "would"? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:10:44

• I think it is better to omit it. -star-night- ♂ (20 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:30:38

• i prefer -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (73 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:47:17

• 回複：i prefer -help15- ♀ (74 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:12:16

• hmm, i like it:) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:18:31

• Very good! -美壇奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:22:30

• 非常精彩！ -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 16:50:18

• Thank Boss Boss. -star-night- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:27:29

• still Build 10? hahaha... -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (41 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:06:14

• 這位新同學在搶一位老同學的飯碗，連搶的方式都一樣:) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:19:02

• oh ... -star-night- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:57:58

• 美壇奇葩譯得又快又好，元梁讀後一定好高興。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:05:27

• 剛回來，，我現在馬上就讀，，， -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:42:35

• 先向奇芭兄鞠躬！對不起，剛回來，，我馬上就讀，，， -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:44:47

• 奇葩兄真是有心人啊，實在是感謝你啊！你翻譯的是最早的版本， -元梁- ♂ (188 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 21:00:39

• 感謝熊兄，15妹妹，雨鷹妹妹，板板妹妹，婉蕠妹妹和其他各位朋友的捧場！謝謝你們！ -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 21:07:37

• 再次感謝奇葩兄的心血付出！非常精彩。元梁十分感激。 -元梁- ♂ (30 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 21:18:28

• Please see posting titled To: Mr.元梁 -美壇奇葩- ♂ (109 bytes) () 06/19/2010 postreply 07:59:52

• 回複：英譯：致少女/For My Girl (Ver. 1.01) -元梁- ♂ (1056 bytes) () 06/19/2010 postreply 10:24:08

• Final version has been posted above. -美壇奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/19/2010 postreply 11:52:58