'be" can be left out in poems? especially with "would"?

來源: help15 於 2010-06-18 18:10:44 [檔案] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (0 bytes)

本文內容已被 [ help15 ] 在 2010-06-19 07:15:05 編輯過。如有問題，請報告版主或論壇管理刪除.

回答: A green mountain would with a clear river …? 由 help15 於 2010-06-18 16:23:14

您的位置：文學城 » 論壇 » 美語世界 » 'be" can be left out in poems? especially with "would"?

• I think it is better to omit it. -star-night- ♂ (20 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:30:38

• i prefer -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (73 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:47:17

• 回複：i prefer -help15- ♀ (74 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:12:16

• hmm, i like it:) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:18:31

• Very good! -美壇奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:22:30