紫君的故事-獻給親愛的紫君君! (Goodnight Story for kids)

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Tale of Purple Lass by 戲雨飛鷹

once upon a time, A gust of wind floated a tiny purple seed and wafted it gently down onto the corner of a dry land. The seed took a root and grew to a little young plant with purple items, purple leaves and red heart. the plant had a beautiful name, Purple Lass. no one noticed her existence. no one watered her. no one touched her. she was growing by herself. but she felt happy everyday, enjoying the hugs of the sun, touches of wind and kisses of rain. she did not have a ambitious wish. she just wanted to bring a little bit of beauty to this dry land.

everyday when the sun rose, she asked the sun, "dear sun, dear sun, When am I going to be grown up?" the sun smiled at her "Purple Lass, Purple Lass, each time I hug you,you will grow a little. be patient. patience is the key."

everytime when the breeze blew, she asked the breeze, "dear breeze,dear breeze, When shall I be grown up?" the breeze caressed her with a laugh "Purple Lass, Purple Lass, each time I kiss you, you will be stronger a little. don't give up. hold the hope. hope is the key."

rain did not come to this land very often. everytime when the rain came down, she asked the rain, "dear rain, dear rain, When shall I be grown up?" the rain gamboled with her leaves, "Purple Lass, Purple Lass, each time I play with you,you will be stronger a little. drink as much as you can. don't waste every chance i visit you. i am very busy. I am not sure when i will see you next time. cherish every chance to grow"

Purple Lass was so grateful and delightful. she waited and waited, hoping someday she would bloom and bring her beauty to this barren land.

One day a vehicle came by, raised quite a dust, ran over her body, and left away. Purple Lass was going to die. she cried and cried for help, not because she was dying, but because she did not want to give up the faith that someday she would made the land a little bit beautiful.

the sun heard her cry, rising high up to warm her heart; the breeze heard her weep, blowing gently to straighten her stems; the rain heard her sighs, coming down to establish her roots. they all felt grievous. The Flower Spirit saw all that happened. she moved and reached down kissing the dying purple lair. the purple lair became full of vitality overnight.

many days later, Purple Lass grew up to be a beautiful flowery tree. this corner of land became so beautiful because of her. the birds flied singing, bees came humming, and butterflies arrived dancing. even the lazy polar bear took an arduous trip over land and water from arctic to see the beautiful Purple. hahaha

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為了寫這個小孩故事,我找出來我的小學生詞匯量本本。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (42 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 18:22:43

頂頂頂!!!:) -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 18:24:02

sweetie, my goodness, that is so beautiful, fairy tale, wonderfu -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (371 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 18:29:53

謝謝,little bear. the story is for you,a kid, to read. -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (70 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 18:47:20

其實,這是老掉牙的故事,我隻是把他寫成了紫君版本: -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (94 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:30:21

紫君 is loved by all here -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 22:30:28

那你也寫一首給紫君。到目前為止你還沒為活動做貢獻呢? -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (16 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 06:14:58

寶貝 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (57 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:26:34

我還沒起床呢 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (18 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:49:28

我覺得我寫了90%。故事的借鑒占10%。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 20:50:16

90% is more than enough, sweetie. -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (47 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 22:25:34

真的? -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (87 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 06:27:22

true。由於你這篇寫的非常好,所以要求就不一樣了。 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (14 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:37:21

typo: she (Flower Spirit) "was" moved .. -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 18:50:24

purple lair->purple lass -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 18:56:12

haha I love the lass to be in the lair -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (19 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:35:15

夠意思吧?我什麽時候能忘了你啊。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (54 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:43:35

who made my sweetie mad? i need to take care of it -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (2 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 21:41:58

oh, you are in a store? i thought youmeant u were in the story: -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:53:16

hahaha -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 21:42:22

你發現沒有,你也在故事裏麵。讀最後一句話。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 20:01:53

haha, yes i saw it at the first read. that speaks volumes...:) -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 21:45:26

想借此表達紫君陪我走過的2年多的日日夜夜。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (283 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:15:51

紫君 has done so much work here... 記得紫君幾天沒來doitthen就 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (8 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 22:33:50

問候bearsback和doitthen,祝你們周末快樂,一切安好. -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 06:54:07

true. 紫mm為大家服務,很辛苦。謝謝! -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (94 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 07:55:52

戲雨飛鷹,謝謝你和我行,感謝你和大家。 -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 06:58:33

很純很美中,又有點戲謔,so your style,love it! -lilac09- 給 lilac09 發送悄悄話 lilac09 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:21:19

謝謝lilac。。。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (84 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:38:00

鷹姐姐,太美了。你是怎麽學的英語? -hahaman- 給 hahaman 發送悄悄話 hahaman 的博客首頁 (14 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:40:25

咱倆都比老熊強:你的回味詩,我的邏輯學。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (28 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:49:17

打是疼, 罵是愛 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (39 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 21:40:46

engineer, accountant, and write -doitthen- 給 doitthen 發送悄悄話 doitthen 的博客首頁 (42 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 21:39:38

你學位讀得怎麽樣了? i mean the online one。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (41 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 06:24:47

記憶力真好。還在第一頁上 -doitthen- 給 doitthen 發送悄悄話 doitthen 的博客首頁 (14 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:57:46

真的?那她會替你考試嗎? -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (47 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 09:48:52

hahahaha -doitthen- 給 doitthen 發送悄悄話 doitthen 的博客首頁 (98 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 10:22:24

hahaha -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (404 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 10:46:58

sweetie, still you should not -doitthen- 給 doitthen 發送悄悄話 doitthen 的博客首頁 (123 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 10:52:06

thank you. I 'm ready for charpter 1 now:) -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (181 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 11:42:30

天呀,戲雨飛鷹,你寫的太好了,充滿了想象力,猶如安徒生的童話. -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (1483 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 06:51:47

謝謝紫君,你的每一手筆都太精美了。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (170 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 07:50:25

紫君,你能看出裏麵的寓意,我很感謝。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (192 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:04:18

送給戲雨飛鷹:For You (英語歌曲) -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (129 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:23:19

thanks, 紫君. you've given me so much. -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:38:52

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