i love it, so well written, i love the words, structures and patterns...pure joy to read...
i am very impressed. this is called literature...i mean it, sweetie
you are one and the only...
i love you...
sweetie, only god knows how far you can go in writings...you have unlimited potential...
sweetie, i have to go now, i will talk to you later...
love...
sweetie, my goodness, that is so beautiful, fairy tale, wonderfu
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• 謝謝,little bear. the story is for you,a kid, to read. -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (70 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 18:47:20
• 其實,這是老掉牙的故事,我隻是把他寫成了紫君版本: -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (94 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 19:30:21
• 紫君 is loved by all here -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 22:30:28
• 那你也寫一首給紫君。到目前為止你還沒為活動做貢獻呢? -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (16 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 06:14:58
• 寶貝 -bearsback- ♂ (57 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:26:34
• 我還沒起床呢 -bearsback- ♂ (18 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:49:28
• 我覺得我寫了90%。故事的借鑒占10%。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 20:50:16
• 90% is more than enough, sweetie. -bearsback- ♂ (47 bytes) () 04/23/2010 postreply 22:25:34
• 真的? -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (87 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 06:27:22
• true。由於你這篇寫的非常好,所以要求就不一樣了。 -bearsback- ♂ (14 bytes) () 04/24/2010 postreply 08:37:21