i love it, so well written, i love the words, structures and patterns...pure joy to read...
i am very impressed. this is called literature...i mean it, sweetie
you are one and the only...
i love you...
sweetie, only god knows how far you can go in writings...you have unlimited potential...
sweetie, i have to go now, i will talk to you later...
love...
sweetie, my goodness, that is so beautiful, fairy tale, wonderfu
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謝謝,little bear. the story is for you,a kid, to read.
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04/23/2010 postreply
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其實,這是老掉牙的故事,我隻是把他寫成了紫君版本:
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04/23/2010 postreply
19:30:21
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紫君 is loved by all here
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04/23/2010 postreply
22:30:28
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那你也寫一首給紫君。到目前為止你還沒為活動做貢獻呢?
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04/24/2010 postreply
06:14:58
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寶貝
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04/24/2010 postreply
08:26:34
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我還沒起床呢
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04/24/2010 postreply
08:49:28
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我覺得我寫了90%。故事的借鑒占10%。
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04/23/2010 postreply
20:50:16
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90% is more than enough, sweetie.
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04/23/2010 postreply
22:25:34
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真的?
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04/24/2010 postreply
06:27:22
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true。由於你這篇寫的非常好,所以要求就不一樣了。
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04/24/2010 postreply
08:37:21