thanks。

回答: 湊了首兒歌。瞎湊了一首:)戲雨飛鷹2010-02-28 15:05:05

i know rhyming can make the poems flow well. but most of time,expression is more important than impression. when rhyming make us uncomfortable to express, we have to compromise.

secondly, if you are quite into old poetry you'd rhyme, just like you write sonnets. no rhyming,no sonnet:). but if you are into quite modern types,you would not always rhyme. correct?

all in all, depends on if you can express the poetry best.

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sweetie, yes, in free verse -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (102 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 19:28:57

謝謝指教。練了一首梨花詩 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (251 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 19:53:25

sweetie, yes, that's it. let feelings speak -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (213 bytes) () 02/28/2010 postreply 21:02:15

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