我是個假詩人

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回答: really?bearsback2009-12-08 18:12:01

就古典詩歌來講,英文講究meter和form。form有sonnet,ballad等。meter也不同,通常是輕音/重音 入 at last (at unstressed,last stressed)。in a sonnet,每行都應該五個這樣的unit,一共10個音節(similar to 5 alternate 平仄 pair in Chinese) 。當然還要押韻。英文poem(古典)是看syllable數,not number of words in a line. Some of what I wrote (sonnets) followed the rules, some didn't.
As for haiku, originally it required 575, where each number indicates the number of syllables (not words) in the corresponding line. Later they relaxed the requirement (in terms of syllable count). Right looks like there is a grammatical change or something, but I never delved into it. Classic poems are much more difficult to write.
Of course there are many nonclassic poems that are just as good such as the raven (from Poe). Whitman might be the first who broke the ground in free verse. Certainly there are music and rhythm in those.
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回複:我是個假詩人 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (142 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:14:26

好啊,現在沒那麽多經力和時間小資呀。我一切穩定下來,會的。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (62 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:39:48

What? -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (151 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:03:49

真寫了?! -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (99 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:26:17

sweetie I am glad you liked the cake. You know me, i -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (58 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 21:35:02

回複:我是個假詩人 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (173 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:19:58

謝謝啊,把底細說的那麽仔細,就不怕我們 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (42 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:32:47

一年半 -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (85 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:44:51

你有天賦。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (50 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:49:31

謝假肢人老師的不惜賜教。收益非淺。:) -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (426 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:27:02

Sweetie -bearsback- 給 bearsback 發送悄悄話 bearsback 的博客首頁 (42 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:39:58

這句話足可以讓我忘掉這周的deadline的壓力了,hehe。 -戲雨飛鷹- 給 戲雨飛鷹 發送悄悄話 戲雨飛鷹 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:44:56

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