回複：我是個假詩人

I forgot to mention that in a sonnet the last two lines are a couplet, it's like a summary. A good sonnet should also have a change of tone somewhere in the first 12 lines.

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• 謝謝啊，把底細說的那麽仔細，就不怕我們 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (42 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:32:47

• 一年半 -bearsback- ♂ (85 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:44:51

• 你有天賦。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (50 bytes) () 12/08/2009 postreply 20:49:31