拜讀了，你這是意大利式sonnet嗎？ABA BCB CDC DED EFE GG

好像有四五處揚抑不對。

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• possibly Italian, I think it is called a terza rima sonnet -monkeyfist- ♂ (215 bytes) () 11/08/2009 postreply 19:48:44

• maybe the first line can be rewritten like -monkeyfist- ♂ (45 bytes) () 11/09/2009 postreply 08:36:11

• in his great courtyard --> inside his courtyard -monkeyfist- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/09/2009 postreply 09:16:33