possibly Italian, I think it is called a terza rima sonnet

來源: monkeyfist 於 2009-11-08 19:48:44 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (215 bytes)
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回答: sonnet 生命之歌 由 monkeyfist 於 2009-11-08 11:16:57

the rhyme: aba bcb cdc ded ee
I learned this form last night and then tried it.

thank you. you are right, some places did not follow the meter: the first line and a few other places. They can be improved.

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