New York Tales (6): The Red Paradise

There's a twilight zone in Flushing Chinatown—where I picked up the following story:

 

 

In 1968, a 19-year-old Red Guard stumbled through the dense forest, his uniform torn and mud-stained. The fervor that had driven him into these remote mountains, he hoped, could overcome fatigue and doubt. He told himself that he was lost in direction, not in purpose. His Little Red Book kept him going. There was no way he would just drop dead.

As the sun began to set, casting a golden hue over the treetops, he caught sight of something unusual. Red banners fluttered in the breeze, their bold slogans proclaiming, "Serve the People!" and "Revolution is not a Dinner Party!" His heart leapt. Could it be a hidden commune, deep in the mountains, living out the ideals of the Great Helmsman?

He pushed through the undergrowth, emerging into a vast clearing. Everything before him took his breath away. Rows of simple, yet well-kept houses stood beneath blossoming peach trees, their pink petals carpeting the ground like soft snow. Men and women in Mao suits moved about the commune with a sense of purpose, their faces serene, illuminated by an inner glow.

 

The Red Guard approached cautiously, unsure of how he would be received. To his relief, the people welcomed him with open arms, offering food, water, and a place to rest. They spoke little of the outside world, but he could feel their shared dedication to the cause. Here, in this secluded sanctuary, was the true heart of the revolution.

As night fell, the Red Guard was led to a small hut near the edge of the commune. Inside, he found a simple bed and a bookshelf filled with works of Marx, Lenin, and, of course, Chairman Mao. He felt at home, thanks to his faith in the revolution.

That night, as he drifted off to sleep, strange dreams haunted him. He saw the faces of the villagers, not as comrades, but as something else—something older, more ancient. The peach trees outside his window seemed to shimmer with an otherworldly luminescence, their petals whispering secrets in a language he could not understand.

The next morning, he awoke to a changed world. The banners and posters were gone, replaced by hand-painted scrolls of poetry and art. The villagers, too, looked different. Their Mao suits were gone, replaced by flowing robes of silk, and their expressions, once stern with revolutionary zeal, now radiated a peaceful, timeless enlightenment.

Confused, the Red Guard confronted one of the villagers. "Where are the slogans? The banners? What happened to the revolution?"

The villager smiled gently. "The revolution you speak of is but a fleeting moment in the river of time. Here, in the Peach Blossom Paradise, we follow the natural way, free from the turmoil of the outside world."

The Red Guard recoiled, his mind struggling to grasp what he was hearing. "But...the revolution is everything! How can you live without it?"

The villager's smile deepened. "Revolutions come and go, young one! But true peace is found in harmony with nature."

The Red Guard could not accept this. Now his revolutionary zeal burned brighter than ever. He resolved to "revolutionize" the paradise, to bring the villagers back to the true path. He began to organize meetings, trying to reintroduce the slogans, the struggle sessions, the fever pitch that had defined his life.

But the villagers, now unmasked, refused to follow him. They had no interest in the dogma that had consumed the outside world. The Red Guard's attempts to impose his ideology were met with gentle resistance—doors were closed to him, voices grew silent, and the peace of the paradise remained undisturbed.
 

 

Alone and aloof, the Red Guard decided to leave and find a way to bring outside forces to this place, to transform it by any means necessary. But as he reached the edge of the clearing, the path he had taken was no more. The forest seemed to close in around him. Then he simply vanished, leaving behind no trace.


Author / Illustrator: renqiulan

 

 

 

 

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Another version of 桃花源記!or Qiulan‘s English version:) -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 19:53:44

A blend of Zen and chaos of revolution and thus a contrast -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 19:55:30

Commune‘s choices vs Red Guard‘s fevor/dogma/doggednesss很有意思 -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:01:05

The "Peach Blossom Paradise" here is quite different. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:05:45

理解出錯了。但是整個故事有點像陶淵明的《桃花源記》,不知你有沒有讀過? -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:53:55

讀過的。在避秦的意義上,拙作與原著一致。不過,這是個文革故事,情節自然有異。想聽聽你的意見。 -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:08:40

可能是因為我對《桃花源記》印象太深,又對紐約twilight zone不熟悉的原因,一下子就自己先把故事對號入座. -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (666 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:34:53

太感謝了,拙文不足道,故事大半是子虛烏有的胡謅。但如淵明所言:“常著文章自娛,頗示己誌。” -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:47:04

Wow, I didn't even read五柳先生傳。讓我再次敬仰一下!讚你的淡泊! -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 22:31:44

Happy Friday evening! Thank you, 暖冬cool夏, for your question. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:02:06

While the idea of a "Peach Blossom Paradise" during the -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:02:59

Cultural Revolution is intriguing, the historical realities -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:04:08

of the time make it highly improbable. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:04:33

It should be taken as a symbol of hope, resilience, -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:06:17

or a longing for a better world. In this sense, -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:06:52

it could represent the enduring spirit of -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:07:27

the Chinese people in the face of adversity. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:07:50

從解釋看,你一定讀過《桃花源記》。But even put in 文革,你的故事is still probable. -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:56:54

This is, after all, a tale. BTW, right off the bat, I said -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:11:47

I picked it up from Flushing Chinatown's twilight zone. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:13:52

So, renqiulan, you are illustrating your story. I like it. -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:14:57

That's wonderful to hear. Thank you for your kind words. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:18:33

Are you the handsome young man in your illustration? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:21:57

Truth be told,my features are not typically considered Asian -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:25:43

How come you have such a superb command of Chinese? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:28:30

OMG! You even write classical Chinese poems. -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:30:40

Thank you. I've been fortunate to have a mother who is a -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:35:48

sinologist. She's been a wonderful teacher. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:36:44

She would be my dream teacher. I envy you. -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:39:19

I appreciate your compliment, but remember, everyone's -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:42:01

journey is different. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:43:05

That's true. We all have our own unique stories to tell. -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:45:49

What inspired you to write "The Red Paradise"? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:48:42

It was the contrast between the idealism of the Cultural -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:50:18

Revolution and the timeless wisdom rooted in nature. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:51:22

I see. That's how I understand 2.桃花源is also a dreamland. -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:00:06

In a nutshell, my theme is to live free from tyranny. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 14:44:24

In what way the village & its inhabitants made sense to you? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:53:09

It's a return to Great Harmony in a tiny community. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:57:04

What message did you hope to convey with the Red Guard's -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:58:40

mysterious disappearance? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 20:59:20

It spoke to the futility of imposing transient ideologies on -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:15:05

enduring natural truths. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:15:34

Is "The Red Paradise" a critique of the Cultural Revolution -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:17:15

or does it explore universal themes? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:17:50

Both. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:18:41

Why did you choose the Cultural Revolution as the backdrop -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:20:22

for this story? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:20:51

The Cultural Revolution's clash with "the better angels of -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:22:06

our nature" provided a rich setting for seeking freedom. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:22:55

What significance do the peach trees and the blooming -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:24:10

flowers hold in the story? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:24:55

They symbolize the natural, enduring beauty and wisdom -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:26:50

incomprehensible to ideologues and their meek followers. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:27:37

How does the Little Red Book function as a symbol here? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:29:16

It represents a "guiding force" of misguided masses. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:31:06

How about the Red Guard’s struggle to revolutionize -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:33:22

the paradise? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:33:45

He was trying in vain to "cancel" true peace in harmony. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:36:12

What role does the concept of time play in The Red Paradise? -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:38:06

Time conceptualizes the enduring cycles of nature, which the -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:48:16

villagers embrace. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:48:43

We had a great conversation. Talk to you soon. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:51:35

You have a nice weekend. -藍靈- 給 藍靈 發送悄悄話 藍靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:53:05

You too! -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2024 postreply 21:55:11

is there a twilight zone in Flushing Chinatown? -天邊一片白雲- 給 天邊一片白雲 發送悄悄話 天邊一片白雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 12:16:06

I couldn't find it in the internet? -天邊一片白雲- 給 天邊一片白雲 發送悄悄話 天邊一片白雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 12:16:41

I am surprised you know culture revolution so well. -天邊一片白雲- 給 天邊一片白雲 發送悄悄話 天邊一片白雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 12:20:13

I'm no expert on the Cultural Revolution. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 14:58:24

a big contract between Red Paradise and Peach flower garden -天邊一片白雲- 給 天邊一片白雲 發送悄悄話 天邊一片白雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 12:22:33

took this picture in Folks , Olympic national park last year -天邊一片白雲- 給 天邊一片白雲 發送悄悄話 天邊一片白雲 的博客首頁 (117 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 12:33:32

Speaking of Olympic National Park, I'm tempted to quote -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 14:50:07

John Muir: "The clearest way into the Universe is through -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 14:51:37

a forest wilderness." -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 14:52:29

Happy Saturday to you, 白雲! I made up "the twilight zone" . -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 14:47:02

I enjoyed such prerogative as a creative writer, didn't I? -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 14:48:20

you are very creative and full of imagination. -天邊一片白雲- 給 天邊一片白雲 發送悄悄話 天邊一片白雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 17:01:58

haha. I thought only the story is what you make up. -天邊一片白雲- 給 天邊一片白雲 發送悄悄話 天邊一片白雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 17:00:20

agree. true peace is found in harmony with nature -天邊一片白雲- 給 天邊一片白雲 發送悄悄話 天邊一片白雲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 12:24:38

I believe that peace is found in nature's embrace. -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 14:56:01

Good story and nice writing !Very impressive ! -瓷善家- 給 瓷善家 發送悄悄話 瓷善家 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 13:06:57

Thank you so much for your kind words! -renqiulan- 給 renqiulan 發送悄悄話 renqiulan 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2024 postreply 15:04:30

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