Speak to the storm Shout out my pain!甜mm好詩!
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暖冬謬讚了。這幾句是SUNO加的:)我的原詩很簡單的。
-甜蟲蟲-
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06/13/2024 postreply
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When doubt comes in Clouds start piling up the sky這個鋪墊開場很好
-暖冬cool夏-
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06/13/2024 postreply
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Thank you! I'm glad you think so :)
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06/14/2024 postreply
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Missed a preposition in the second verse :)
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06/14/2024 postreply
10:35:32