A Lone Wild Goose. 孤雁

That day in the early winter was freezing cold. I drove to the lake in the evening just to have a change of scenery and have some fresh air. The lake started to freeze up. I saw a lone wild goose standing next to the reeds by the lake, shivering. I suspected that it was unwell due to cold and hunger. How did it get separated from its group? It’ll be difficult to get by on its own. After observing it for a while, I went home. I still thought about it late at night, wondering whether it could survive the long cold night.

 

【七律】孤雁

 

癸卯初冬日，天寒地凍。向晚驅車至湖邊，湖水已結冰。見一孤雁立於湖邊蘆葦叢旁，瑟瑟發抖，疑是受凍挨餓而身不適。觀察良久而歸，至深夜仍甚念之，不知它能否挨過漫長寒夜。

 

病雁立身蘆葦邊，孤煢凍水與霜天。

曾飛雲裏常承愛，已了世間應有緣。

此處冰心連朔漠，當時紫靄籠山川。

平安保你生寒夜，再次相逢又一年。

 

(© December 2, 2023, godog)

 

 

 

 

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• 此處冰心連朔漠，當時紫靄籠山川。對仗工整，此處頸聯寫得好看。頷聯，讀起來心有戚戚。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 13:23:40

• 希望這種共鳴是美好的 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 16:29:19

• 曾飛雲裏常承愛，已了世間應有緣。Go兄心柔軟細膩，此詩立意好，對仗工整，詩前的短文言簡意賅，讚！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 13:37:45

• Go兄心柔軟細膩，此/詩立意好，對仗工整，詩前的短文言簡意賅 +100086 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 15:07:21

• 謝謝暖冬溫暖的鼓勵：）） -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 16:33:05

• “平安保你生寒夜，再次相逢又一年” 詩人宅心仁厚，躍然紙上。 -ToClouds- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 13:50:14

• 詩人宅心仁厚，躍然紙上。+100086 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 15:04:32

• 謝謝你這麽說 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 16:36:06

• 讚！it’s a nice inspiration for a free-style poem:) -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 14:17:00

• Hope it can inspire you to write a nice poem -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 16:38:17

• 讚GO兄雙語詩！ -衛寧- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 17:28:05

• 本地也可看到寒冬臘月中，孤雁孤鷺在寒水中獨釣寒江雪呢。 -古樹羽音- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2023 postreply 21:17:16

• 讚雙語詩！ -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/03/2023 postreply 13:09:20