Thoughts Go Far Away on A Late Autumn Day

Thoughts Go Far Away on A Late Autumn Day

 

The early sun hovers above

the village outside the city.

A piece of red cloud falls onto a maple

tree where the autumn ripens.

 

A flock of birds calling for each other,

loud and clear, to go somewhere.

They fly through the woods,

a few leaves knocked down,

gone is also their singing sound.

 

After the candle in my heart goes out,

I can no longer shed more tears.

In order for the eyes of my mind to see further, I have climbed up for years.

 

So I can turn into a white cloud

and drift back to elsewhere.

My thoughts go so far away,

like an eastward river.

 

【七律】深秋思遠

 

日懸城外野村頭，滿落紅雲一樹秋。

呼伴引朋群鳥鬧，穿林打葉數聲幽。

心燭已滅休垂淚，靈目欲窮更上樓。

身似碧雲歸別處，魂馳千裏水東流。

 

(© November, 2023, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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• Wow,古詩詞，功底深厚！中英文俱佳！Gone is also their singing sound尤其好！欣賞了！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 07:54:08

• +100086！！！：）） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:28:27

• 謝謝鼓勵與喜歡！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:54:18

• 身似碧雲歸別處，魂馳千裏水東流。好七律！欣賞學習。占位點讚。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:27:33

• +100 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 17:44:35

• 謝謝盈盈！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:55:58

• Take a breath, enjoy the scene, and keep climbing :-) -7grizzly- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:35:02

• The higher I climb, the harder I might fall:)) -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:57:14

• Beautifully descriptive with wonderful images -waterfowl- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 16:35:44

• Thanks for your encouraging words! -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:58:05

• 讚雙語詩！ -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 17:16:36

• 謝方外兄 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:58:38

• 英文好讚！讀起來很舒服。。攝影也好。美詩美片，讓人欣賞。。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 03:50:30