Thoughts Go Far Away on A Late Autumn Day

Thoughts Go Far Away on A Late Autumn Day

 

The early sun hovers above

the village outside the city.

A piece of red cloud falls onto a maple

tree where the autumn ripens.

 

A flock of birds calling for each other,

loud and clear, to go somewhere.

They fly through the woods,

a few leaves knocked down,

gone is also their singing sound.

 

After the candle in my heart goes out,

I can no longer shed more tears.

In order for the eyes of my mind to see further, I have climbed up for years.

 

So I can turn into a white cloud

and drift back to elsewhere.

My thoughts go so far away,

like an eastward river.

 

【七律】深秋思遠

 

日懸城外野村頭,滿落紅雲一樹秋。

呼伴引朋群鳥鬧,穿林打葉數聲幽。

心燭已滅休垂淚,靈目欲窮更上樓。

身似碧雲歸別處,魂馳千裏水東流。

 

(© November, 2023, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Wow,古詩詞,功底深厚!中英文俱佳!Gone is also their singing sound尤其好!欣賞了! -暖冬cool夏- 給 暖冬cool夏 發送悄悄話 暖冬cool夏 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 07:54:08

+100086!!!:)) -盈盈一笑間- 給 盈盈一笑間 發送悄悄話 盈盈一笑間 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:28:27

謝謝鼓勵與喜歡! -godog- 給 godog 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:54:18

身似碧雲歸別處,魂馳千裏水東流。好七律!欣賞學習。占位點讚。 -盈盈一笑間- 給 盈盈一笑間 發送悄悄話 盈盈一笑間 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:27:33

+100 -顫音- 給 顫音 發送悄悄話 顫音 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 17:44:35

謝謝盈盈! -godog- 給 godog 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:55:58

Take a breath, enjoy the scene, and keep climbing :-) -7grizzly- 給 7grizzly 發送悄悄話 7grizzly 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 09:35:02

The higher I climb, the harder I might fall:)) -godog- 給 godog 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:57:14

Beautifully descriptive with wonderful images -waterfowl- 給 waterfowl 發送悄悄話 waterfowl 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 16:35:44

Thanks for your encouraging words! -godog- 給 godog 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:58:05

讚雙語詩! -方外居士- 給 方外居士 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 11/15/2023 postreply 17:16:36

謝方外兄 -godog- 給 godog 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 11:58:38

英文好讚!讀起來很舒服。。攝影也好。美詩美片,讓人欣賞。。 -盈盈一笑間- 給 盈盈一笑間 發送悄悄話 盈盈一笑間 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/16/2023 postreply 03:50:30

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