Piano

black keys
white keys
touched by
moving fingers that
connected with
a singing heart
metal pedals
kissed by
nodding feet

the sound of music
dancing and flowing in
keys
pedals
fingers
feet
ears
eyes
hair
breaths
air
reaching the hearts
that are listening

Comments from Allpoetry:
Emeline Moche - Your poem is short but so moving, the short words in the second stanzas feel like music!

brandon- - such an incredible write. the flow and imagery were remarkable. thank you for this tight share.

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• “such an incredible write. the flow and imagery were -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 08:25:42

• remarkable“. I second this! -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 08:26:34

• Thank you, 盈盈！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 09:41:36

• "nodding feet"? I thought only one foot is involved in piano -7grizzly- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 09:06:48

• like driving a car. No? -7grizzly- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 09:07:25

• Hahaha, good question. FYI, see inside: -CBA7- ♀ (205 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 09:43:50

• Got it. Thank you! -7grizzly- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 11:20:11

• Ask Tim:)) In my memory, only one foot too:)) -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 10:09:07

• 咦？中文版呢？ -爪四哥- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 10:02:46

• Good question. 這首詩是靈感閃現後，直接用英文寫的，好像英文比中文更能表達那種意境，所以就沒有譯成中文。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 10:11:04

• 我寫雙語小詩，有時是先寫英文，然後譯成中文，反之亦然。有時隻有英文版，有時隻有中文版，都是跟著感覺走 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 10:14:40

• 藏龍臥虎之地！好詩啊！有才！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 10:10:03

• 藏龍臥虎之地！好詩啊！有才！ - 暖冬cool夏 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 10:17:35

• 冬夏過獎了，謝謝鼓勵。你的網名很有詩意，中西合璧，有創意 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 10:19:04

• I am not a poetry person, but I can feel that, -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 16:15:53

• between ebony and ivory, you have a spring in your step. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 16:19:13

• Who knows? Maybe your Muse is still dancing on your piano. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 16:20:30

• Muse is dancing on the piano. 喜歡這一句！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 18:14:27

• Such a beautiful line! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 20:08:07

• Thank you, 小西！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2023 postreply 17:50:41

• Thank you, 盈盈! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2023 postreply 17:47:59

• 秋蘭，your write is very poetic. You're a poet better than me. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 20:11:39

• Thank you for your nice comment. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/27/2023 postreply 20:13:23

• I really appreciate it. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2023 postreply 18:00:38

• I respectfully disagree with you on this one. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2023 postreply 18:00:02