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《浣溪沙》

 

十月初霜化曉彤，夜來葭月一江楓，簪梅臘月笑寒冬。

雪塑英雄皆守土，塵追霸主又移宮；人間最愛玩沙童。

 

（《浣溪沙》下片首兩句例多對仗）

 

Let frost take the first bite at October. 

Let maple leaves fire up November. 

Don't let doom and gloom ruin December. 

 

Smiling, snowmen are guarding our land, 

Thanks to many a little hand ---

Well, kids are tired of playing with sand. 

 

（I would like to exercise a little discretion here. My English version is not so much a literal translation as an inspired extension of my Chinese version.）

 

所有跟帖： 

• 秋蘭兄真是丘壑在胸，一揮而就。真心佩服。 -送讚幹部- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/08/2023 postreply 19:14:52

• 真不敢當。I am still on a steep learning curve. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/08/2023 postreply 22:05:54