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《浣溪沙》

 

十月初霜化曉彤,夜來葭月一江楓,簪梅臘月笑寒冬。

雪塑英雄皆守土,塵追霸主又移宮;人間最愛玩沙童。

 

(《浣溪沙》下片首兩句例多對仗)

 

Let frost take the first bite at October. 

Let maple leaves fire up November. 

Don't let doom and gloom ruin December. 

 

Smiling, snowmen are guarding our land, 

Thanks to many a little hand ---

Well, kids are tired of playing with sand. 

 

(I would like to exercise a little discretion here. My English version is not so much a literal translation as an inspired extension of my Chinese version.)