【藍綠第二次綁架】綠團 A fawn to a deer

A fawn to a deer

Author：妖妖靈

Last summer，

she was a helpless lonely fawn，

hiding in the sun-dappled bushes,

with white spots covering her body

for camouflage.

Time flies. One and half years later，

Winter is here.

She becomes a brave deer，

dancing with her slend legs,

with the background music Jingle bells.

All the white spots that used to be on her back

become snow flakes flying in the joyful air. 

 

Revised version by renqiulan：表達更地道，非常感謝他：）

Last summer

she was a helpless lonely fawn，

hiding in the sunlight-dappled bushes，

with white spots covering her body

for camouflage.

Time flies. One and a half years later，

Winter is here.

She becomes a brave deer，

dancing with her slender legs

to the tune of Jingle bells in the background.

All the white spots on her back

are flying off as snowflakes in the joyful air.

 

移花接木：鏟後綜合征，post-shovel syndrome

https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/277978.html

Unexpected encounter 

https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/223667.html

A fawn 攝影：移花接木 

 

雪趣 視頻製作：移花接木

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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• I applaud your idea... -renqiulan- ♂ (85 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 15:13:52

• 突然有了這個靈感，把它記錄下來。又改了改，你幫我再看看語法問題？ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 17:12:46

• I'll see what I can do. Here is my input: -renqiulan- ♂ (674 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:23:21

• 改得好極啦！非常非常感謝！：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:36:12

• Thanks! You did strike the right chord with readers like me. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:44:26

• Pls check my input again.By all means make it right for you. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:49:55

• I put your revised version in my main post! 也讓大家參考學習！非常感謝！！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:51:52

• I think I have a typo in my input.. -renqiulan- ♂ (95 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:00:48

• 好文章是改出來的！學到很多！第一步先寫，然後一遍一遍去改！才能進步！你太厲害啦！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:53:15

• It is your idea. It is your creation. I am your reader. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:56:46

• 我為了記住你的改寫，專門寫的，反複對照幾遍，終於把你的改寫都寫下來了：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:59:47

• I think I have a typo in my input: -renqiulan- ♂ (95 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:02:26

• 謝謝！改了：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:04:41

• Right on! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:52:06

• baby is here -移花接木- ♂ (129 bytes) () 12/18/2022 postreply 05:20:48

• 找網管把那次活動中所有丟失的貼都找回了。你去看一看？還記得哪次活動嗎？ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2022 postreply 08:45:58

• 恭喜妖妖。首頁進來，謝謝網管，【藍綠第二次綁架】綠團 A fawn to a deer推薦成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2022 postreply 17:18:29

• 讚靈靈， 小鹿真可愛， 靈靈的詩歌很美。節日快樂。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2022 postreply 21:57:29

• 來到美壇才知道小鹿是fawn的 -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/19/2022 postreply 10:09:06