Pls check my input again.By all means make it right for you.

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• I put your revised version in my main post! 也讓大家參考學習！非常感謝！！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:51:52

• I think I have a typo in my input.. -renqiulan- ♂ (95 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:00:48

• 好文章是改出來的！學到很多！第一步先寫，然後一遍一遍去改！才能進步！你太厲害啦！ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:53:15

• It is your idea. It is your creation. I am your reader. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:56:46

• 我為了記住你的改寫，專門寫的，反複對照幾遍，終於把你的改寫都寫下來了：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:59:47

• I think I have a typo in my input: -renqiulan- ♂ (95 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:02:26

• 謝謝！改了：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:04:41

• Right on! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:52:06