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Eternal sand

Pick up a grain of sand by the sea
the sand I lost on that monsoon day
Once a flint stone
it set the dark night on fire
Dawn and dusk brush it over and over
and grind it into a grain of white sand
But the blood stain on the sand is still shining
and burning the callus on my palm
and blinding my eyes
So I cast the sand into the sun
gaze it parabola and vanish into the ocean

© a month ago, memory   
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Likes: badwolfbailey, Daffodil35, Tigerblue44, kaye, Jon Acuña-Miller, Mrkjbsch, Ivy Triple, Blueberry4, ANA614

Daffodil35 - Interesting writing )) sometimes we have to let go of things that hurt us .. this is what your poem makes me think of .. something can seem so nice but are not as nice as they appear  . A good poem

Inspired me.

8 hours ago   

Tigerblue44 - great piece enjoyed reading

the theme is awesome and life giving

greatly penned

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• Mind is profound in this poem. Greatly penned, indeed! -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 02:49:58

• Once a flint stone it set the dark night on fire -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 02:50:42

• But the blood stain on the sand is still shining and burning -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 02:51:18

• the callus on my palm and blinding my eyes. -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 02:53:10

• I am impressed! -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 02:54:34

• 果醬了 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 08:46:44

• 讚一個“心細如塵” -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 07:59:58

• 謝謝，因為撿沙子？哈哈哈 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 08:46:30

• 這是the life cycle of a sand：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 11:04:06

• 恭喜顫音。首頁進來，謝謝網管，Eternal sand 難得被置頂 顯擺一次 推薦成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2022 postreply 13:33:34