試譯《秋夜寄邱員外》劉禹錫

懷君屬秋夜，
散步詠涼天。
空山鬆子落，
幽人應未眠。

 

An Autumn night like this makes me think of you

As I walk and sense the coolness of the air.

The sound of falling pine cones echoes in the mount.

What keeps you awake at this hour?

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• 湊一版 wordy 的: :) -ibelieu- ♀ (425 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 17:14:26

• 每次押韻都妥妥的：）為什麽第一句是“find me”？ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 19:31:46

• 倒裝了，順過來是 -ibelieu- ♀ (410 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 19:45:25

• 話不多，簡單明了：） -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 19:31:03