You are the only one (original poem)

 

you are the only one

Whenever my soul is wandering
I long to see you
All the diamond stars are shining 
Are you looking at the lonely moon too

Whenever your name come into my sight
I can still see peach blossoms of that day.
 You said I was the brightest at night
 But you just a shooting star and hid away
 
For you I sing and write it all 
Are you somewhere walking back to me
I'll wait for the sparkles from love to fall 
It's just the way , it's meant to be

You are the only one I loved ,I say
You are the only one I need,I pray

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