We feel for you

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回答: I Am Composing A SongFlyingstraw2015-11-20 16:28:48

 

把上麵 Poe 的 Alone 亂改了下:

A man and a woman, a perfect pair
One handsome and the other fair
All night the two would bill and coo
While she's aching for him to woo
Suddenly in an autumn dawn
Of a rainy day, he was gone
Without a sound, without a word
(Which is a mystery). Then is heard
In ev'ry depth of heat and chill
The yearning song which rings grief still
In the river, or the fountain
On the bare slope of the mountain
In the sun that rolls around her
On the winterscape of silver
In the lightning, the thunder, and the storm
And the cloud that takes any form
We feel her passions that she does bring
As we once drank from a common spring 

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Wow, wow... -Flyingstraw- 給 Flyingstraw 發送悄悄話 Flyingstraw 的博客首頁 (558 bytes) () 11/22/2015 postreply 15:38:31

added -youdecide- 給 youdecide 發送悄悄話 youdecide 的博客首頁 (98 bytes) () 11/22/2015 postreply 18:31:12

不加可能也行。 -肖莊- 給 肖莊 發送悄悄話 肖莊 的博客首頁 (142 bytes) () 11/23/2015 postreply 13:14:04

謝謝,向你學了冠詞。 -youdecide- 給 youdecide 發送悄悄話 youdecide 的博客首頁 (650 bytes) () 11/23/2015 postreply 18:49:04

Tks肖莊 ! Both -Flyingstraw- 給 Flyingstraw 發送悄悄話 Flyingstraw 的博客首頁 (556 bytes) () 11/24/2015 postreply 07:35:15

A well-written poem. -斕婷- 給 斕婷 發送悄悄話 斕婷 的博客首頁 (65 bytes) () 11/23/2015 postreply 19:04:28

斕婷好。我在學習古詩:) -youdecide- 給 youdecide 發送悄悄話 youdecide 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/23/2015 postreply 19:31:54

Please post it separately, really well written! -Flyingstraw- 給 Flyingstraw 發送悄悄話 Flyingstraw 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/24/2015 postreply 07:47:56

Thanks again. I enjoy reading your poems. 可能下次再貼:) -youdecide- 給 youdecide 發送悄悄話 youdecide 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/24/2015 postreply 19:33:44

請您先登陸,再發跟帖!