If you are really serious about writing in English, you should go over your essay again, and I am sure you can correct quite a lot of those obvious errors yourself.
Nobody corrected those errors? There are more than 50, I think.
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I corrected a number of mistakes.
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07/23/2015 postreply
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Okay, it's good you have corrected some of them yourself,
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07/23/2015 postreply
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I am grateful. I updated the writing.
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07/25/2015 postreply
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More discussion
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07/25/2015 postreply
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I can't thank you enough!
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07/26/2015 postreply
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Nice proof-reading and correction.
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07/26/2015 postreply
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Thank you. Let the colors in the text signify my appreciations
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07/26/2015 postreply
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