Okay, it's good you have corrected some of them yourself,

because it is good for you to go over this essay again if you truly want to improve your writing. Still you didn't seem to use the auto-speller to get rid of those obvious ones, and you also made some new errors. Anyway, as I promised, I am now trying to correct more errors in the essay. I only picked the obvious and easy-to-correct ones.

In countryside > In the countryside

Preparing field, > preparing the field,

tending cows and horses > tending to cows and horses

certain amount of produce > certain amounts [or a certain amount] of produce

corn grains > corn [or do you mean cornmeal?]

numbers of hours > the number of hours

Officially we were a family of five. My mother, elder sister, younger sister, younger brother, and I. > Officially we were a family of five, my mother, elder sister, younger sister, younger brother, and I.

sufficient amount> a sufficient amount

most of the family > most of the families

devoting to the government’s work > devoting himself to the government’s work

at middle night > in the middle of the night

core ears > corn

from field > from the field

through muddy country road> through the muddy country road

Meat were scarce > Meat was scarce

pork meat > pork

like wedding or funeral > such as weddings or funerals

in Chinese New Year > during the Chinese New Year

was treated with a boiled egg > was treated to a boiled egg

had regular meal > had our regular meal

careful peeling off the egg shell > carefully peeling off the eggshell

biting off the egg bit-by-bit in a slow motion > nibbling at the egg slowly

took the notice > took notice [“take the notice” and “take notice” mean differently]

in the same day > on the same day

three year apart> three years apart

my elder sister and I will > my elder sister and I would

in our own birthdays. >on our own birthdays.

When I was 10-year-old > When I was ten years old

add strains to > add more burden on

But my mother determined to carry the child to the term in hoping it would be a boy. > But my mother decided to carry the child to term in the hope it would be a boy.

believed the principles of communism > believed in the principles of Communism

At times, she became lean and started to worry about the health of the baby inside her.
As time went by, she became so skinny that she started to worry…

lay eggs > laid eggs

public commerce system? Did you mean 供銷社？

He has bright red comb > He had a bright red comb

chicken perch? The word “perch” does not mean an enclosure. So your chickens must be really well-behaved.

in the day > during the day

in early winter > in the early winter

in Kang > on the kang

working on homework > working on our homework

She started the fire in the kitchen > She lighted the wood burning stove in the kitchen

Something seemed bothering yet exciting her. > Something seemed to be bothering yet exciting her.

Communist > Communist

dad would rather die before we kill and eat the rooster that belonged to the production group. > dad would rather die before we could kill and eat the rooster that belonged to the production group.

the pig in its dent > the pig in the pen (pigsty)

in deep sleep > soundly asleep

The rooster struggled silently with her wings swaying up and down > The rooster struggled silently with his wings flapping up and down

She slit off his head? Are you sure that is the way people kill a rooster? From what you described later, I believe you meant she slashed his neck (that’s the common way to kill a rooster and get his blood).

allow blood drip into a bowl > allow its blood to drip into a bowl

She added salt, soy sauce, cinema and a very tiny amount of cooking wine into the pot > cinema???

let the water to boil slowly > let the water simmer

other messes > other mess

we forgot the manner > we forgot the manners

We devoured like hungry wolves > We devoured it like hungry wolves

The door creaked half-open or The door creaked ajar

Do not you even care about your son inside me? > Don’t you even care about your son inside me?

lost at words > lost for words

bursted out: burst out

in wheat field > in the wheat field

core grit > corn grit

a steamed corn bread > a steamed cornmeal bun

book bags > schoolbags

hand sewing a clothe for the baby > sewing some clothes for the baby

We did not spoke > We did not speak

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• I am grateful. I updated the writing. -JasmineZ- ♀ (992 bytes) () 07/25/2015 postreply 04:07:13

• More discussion -rancho2008- ♀ (3323 bytes) () 07/25/2015 postreply 11:20:06

• I can't thank you enough! -JasmineZ- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 03:39:35

• Nice proof-reading and correction. -niteBynite- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 05:46:35

• Thank you. Let the colors in the text signify my appreciations -JasmineZ- ♀ (55 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 05:58:30