"He re-feathers his hair with his fingers and flicks his bangs back using only his neck muscles."
It is very heavy and awkward. I doubt native speakers would understand what you are trying to say here. They would understand something like "fling his hair back with a jerk of his head." Besides, unnecessary details are distracting and misleading.
Isn't this overdone?
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how about.....
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Yes, "comb" is often used.
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