Isn't this overdone?

來源: hammerheadshark 於 2014-07-22 20:55:45 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (381 bytes)

"He re-feathers his hair with his fingers and flicks his bangs back using only his neck muscles."

It is very heavy and awkward. I doubt native speakers would understand what you are trying to say here. They would understand something like "fling his hair back with a jerk of his head." Besides, unnecessary details are distracting and misleading.

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• how about..... -sure- ♀ 給 sure 發送悄悄話 (111 bytes) () 07/23/2014 postreply 04:47:30

• Yes, "comb" is often used. -hammerheadshark- ♀ 給 hammerheadshark 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 07/23/2014 postreply 17:37:40

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