請大俠給看看這個短文,修改修改,多謝了

來源: caixia 2013-10-23 08:27:37 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀: 次 (1468 bytes)
真是趕鴨子上架,本來我的英文就不是很好,更何況是這種帶有感情色彩的review,對我這個理科人很難呀。
大家給提點意見,是不是太短了啊。

I knew Dr. H first as a teacher when she was teaching ##course in spring 2006. Although many years have past, some episodes happened in the class are still vivid to me, because that class is the first one I took after enrolled in # university. I was impressed in how knowledgeable Dr. H was, and how friendly and patient she was to students, especially as fresh international student as me. Because of the good impression, I asked Dr. H to be on my committee for my Master degree in fall 2006, and then asked her to be my major advisor in 2007. Since then, Dr. H provided huge support for my study and research, as well as personal life. She was the one I would go to whenever I had problems in my research. She was always able to solve the problems, and most importantly, encouraged me to do more. Besides her professional aspects, personally, she was caring and considerate. She tried her upmost to help me adjusted to the foreign life by inviting me home and to many social and traditional activities. Without her advisor, I would have not finished my thesis and published scientific papers with high quality; without her help, I would have not fitted in and enjoyed my life in the United States as I do today. Therefore, from a student’s point view, I highly recommend to promote Dr. H as a full professor. She deserves it.

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改了一些語法問題 -聚曦亭- 給 聚曦亭 發送悄悄話 (22082 bytes) () 10/23/2013 postreply 12:07:08

還是用high quality scientific papers好一些。 -聚曦亭- 給 聚曦亭 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 10/23/2013 postreply 12:15:07

high quality research papers -hammerheadshark- 給 hammerheadshark 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 10/23/2013 postreply 21:28:02

回複:改了一些語法問題 -hammerheadshark- 給 hammerheadshark 發送悄悄話 (3442 bytes) () 10/23/2013 postreply 21:53:54

回複:回複:改了一些語法問題 -聚曦亭- 給 聚曦亭 發送悄悄話 (37606 bytes) () 10/24/2013 postreply 08:12:19

多謝了,修改的真好 -caixia- 給 caixia 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 10/24/2013 postreply 17:08:58

多謝各位的修改,非常好。 多謝sportwoman的 -caixia- 給 caixia 發送悄悄話 (45 bytes) () 10/24/2013 postreply 17:06:58

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