回複:改了一些語法問題

回答: 改了一些語法問題聚曦亭2013-10-23 12:07:08


1.     
Although many years have passed, some of the episodes that took place in the class are still vivid to me. This may be because that class was the first one I took after I was accepted into # university.
==> After so many years, I still clearly remember many things about the class, probably because it was the first course I took after being accepted by the university.


2.     As an international freshman
==> Being an international student…


3.     and then asked her to be my major an advisor for my major in 2007.
==> and then asked her to be my major advisor in 2007. (the original version is better)


4.     as well as personal life
==> as well as to my personal life


5.     She was always able to solve the problems for me…
==> She has always been very helpful whenever I have problems…


6.     professional aspects traits
==>
  professionalism


7.     she was also had a caring and considerate personality 
==>
she is caring and considerate (original version is better)


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